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ACK! [Feb. 23rd, 2004|08:19 pm]
Purple Prose


Not 2 minutes after I join this community, I find this:

Story Title: Beautiful (http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1744051)
Author Name: Elektrikal Flirt
Fandom: Weiss Kreuz
The Setup: "Here it goes, Jae runs into Omi...litteraly, and falls in love. She's a famous singer and everyone in town hates her because she pretty. Omi helps her. yay!"

Jae walked down the street. Her silky black hair swayed behind her. Like I said, her hair was black with silver streaks through it and she had light purple eyes to match her really light purple lips. Her skin was pale and she looked about 5’5.

/Isn’t that that famous singer.

Yeah. Didn’t she sing Symphony of life?

Yeah, she did.

Wow. I can’t believe she’s in town!/

Jae grinned. It appeared that she was famous here too.

“I just can’t get away from the fame can I?” She chirped. Suddenly she hit something and fell back on her ass.

“OW! HEY YOU JERK! WATCH IT!” She snapped as she got to her feet.

“Sorry.” Came a reply. Jae looked up at the guy she’d knocked over. Suddenly her pupils went into the shape of love hearts.

“Come again.”

The guy giggled. “Are you okay? You seem dazed.” He told her. She shook off the love hearts and nodded.

As if the character description wasn't bad enough, she actually put in love hearts! >.

From: fishtoes
2004-03-11 09:33 am (UTC)
"like I said, her hair was..."

Like I Said? What kind of kind of writing is that?
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